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Friday, August 31, 2018

Key into Evaluation- My best day

My best day  


I was four and I had no one to play with. I always used to be sad, unhappy and lonely. But one day mom told me that she had a surprise for me and that I had to guess so I asked if it was a dog, “ she not quit ” , then I asked her if it was a barbie dream house, and she said “ not that close”.  Then she said have one more guess, I said a little brother and she yelled “ Yes finally you’ve got it ”.
Months went by as I waited for my little brother to come. Meanwhile my dad was trying to look for names to give my little brother.


Finally the day had come, there was water on the kitchen floor well I thought it was water until my dad told me what it actually was. My dad called my Aunt to come babysit us while they went to the hospital but I think he forgot that she already came. A night went by and my Aunt drove us to the hospital. My dad out a room and showed me and my older brother to our mom. She was so tired I could see it. My mom said that dad named him Griffin, I said Griffin that a cool name. I can't wait to tell everyone my special news.

Today for Reading working on a DLO about either the best day that we've ever had or the worst day that we've had, so I chose the best day. So wrote about the day got my little brother and in this I explained how I felt, what I was going to do and that I going to tell every one at school on Monday. I really liked doing this because I got to explain a very important day in my life. 

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