My first flight
I woke up ready sore through the morning aroma.
I was ready to take a leap of faith. I spread my wings about to take off.
A strong wind rushed by me and I took a real fall.
As I layed on the grass I could see geese fly by in as skein with loud sound honking and
I wondered how they felt as they flew.
I am scared and nervous but I want to be brave. Butterflies looped in my stomach and
suddenly I felt quit queasy.
As I climbed safely in my barn and sat with a silent sigh I saw beetles scuttle by,
worms raced across the meadow,
grasshoppers leap and jumped through grass, bees buzzed from one
flower to another and other birds flew,through the trees.
I stood on a branch,spread my wings and launched myself with the a strong wind.
I was ready to take a leap of faith. I spread my wings about to take off.
A strong wind rushed by me and I took a real fall.
As I layed on the grass I could see geese fly by in as skein with loud sound honking and
I wondered how they felt as they flew.
I am scared and nervous but I want to be brave. Butterflies looped in my stomach and
suddenly I felt quit queasy.
As I climbed safely in my barn and sat with a silent sigh I saw beetles scuttle by,
worms raced across the meadow,
grasshoppers leap and jumped through grass, bees buzzed from one
flower to another and other birds flew,through the trees.
I stood on a branch,spread my wings and launched myself with the a strong wind.
As I went higher and higher in the sky. I saw the geese in their skein and I saw meadow from higher than I’ve ever seen it before. It was the best feeling in the world because I could finally feel the open air. I could feel the clouds as it touched my wing. I was strong and I was brave that is why I had the confidence to do this for as long as I could possibly do.
This week for writing we created a narrative based on Leap of Faith. In my narrative I used powerful words to make the reader have an image what I've written. We could speak to the people next to us because it would be better to hear about the other person's story. I really liked writing this narrative because I got to image that I was a owl that was about to take there first leap of faith.
Hi Nickaelam
ReplyDeletel really enjoyed reading your story l think you could have worked on your blurb a little bit more and write more about what you did. Your writing gives me a clear pitcher in my mind so l know what leap of faith is. l like the way you added a pitcher to show what a leap of faith is.
Great work